The teaser trailer requirements that have been brought to mine and James' attention mean that we need to shorten the length of the trailer, firstly by including less shots and attention being paid to the main story line will be lessened but some how still getting the main ideas and themes behind the film to the audience and give them a reason to come and see it.
The first idea James and I have come up with is as follows:
Teaser Trailer
A woman is heard talking. Soon a man is then heard shouting insulting the women for what she has said, gradually zooming out showing the elevator controls, shouting is heard over the top, 2 gunshots are heard, the camera stops zooming out, a short pause, a man can be heard slightly groaning and 2 bursts of blood splatter onto the controls. The screen turns black and a short piece of dialogue is then heard, saying ‘Revenge lives in all of us’. The title then comes in from the black.
Script:
Woman: You disgusting, vulgar, arrogant punk. You don’t realise how painful it is hearing your constant yammering, just because you have some TV show. Shame you-
Young Man: You bitch! How do you like being kicked by a disgusting, vulgar, arrogant punk? Your stinking perfume makes me sick. Don’t you realise who I am!
*2 gun shots*
*A short pause is heard and soon an explosion is heard of blood splattering*
*The screen turns to black*
Narrator: Revenge lives in all of us.
*The title sequence comes in*
This idea is, however, only in development. James did bring forth the idea that maybe there is too little going on which is surprising for a teaser trailer but i do understand what he's trying to say and I guess it shows the balance one has to achieve when you need to create something that bases its appeal on giving away very little.
When I'm constantly trying to base what I'm doing on what someone else has done before via youtube etc its time for me to step back and look at my true motivation for creating a trailer and what I'm trying to achieve rather than what someone has already tried to achieve and it does get a lot easier. You see to make things flow effectively I need to stop creating this for an exam board but create it for a film audience and think of the type of trailer that I would want to show to a potential audience and what I would want to see on screen because this is a film that I would love for people to come and enjoy and creating an intriguing and exciting teaser trailer will have that desired effect.